Don Coles, on rhyme
If that search for
the rhyming sound to end your line with, that clink that locks the
rhyme in, isn't a true search, i.e. if it doesn't send the shaft down
to the deepest level this poem you're working on can live at, deeper
than you could have reached without this self-imposed
rhyme-search, then you stopped digging too soon, you accepted a word
merely because it rhymed, it simply slid into place without making
anything new happen; and if this occurs even twice, no, even once,
your poem's probably already dead in the water, it's already,
flottaison blême
et ravie, lost to
human sight.
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